I have just joined this group and I thought It would be a good way to get some feedback on some poetry I have written,
So, if you read this leave a comment! Even if you are indifferent to crap such as this tell me you are indifferent to crap such as this!

SUN WORSHIP
When you rise
Flowers turn to face you
A million blades of grass
Each cry a single tear of dew
Upon our face
You light our joy
Our Sorrow
We are blinded
'til we see you tomorrow

Through Dust

Looking back,
Through dusty spyglass,
I see the places,
The places past,
Peaking back,
Through the wrong lens,
Giants are reduced to men,
We have not changed,
Just in our face,
The creases in the mirror,
Tell us we have aged

I'm going to post a couple a day probably so if you like these come and read the others or if you don't come and read the others any way and leave me some abuse.