shall I draw you in from the shadows?
it is cold; and you are trembling.
I would;
but are you ready
to leave that darkness behind you?
I danced,
whilst you lay sleeping,
and sprent my fairydusts * * * * * * * * * * *;
and those black dragons,
that winged amok
within your mind,
are now truly dead.
the dead cannot hurt us;
not unless we embrace their crumbling corpses,
or kiss their brittle lips.
I will not lie;
you are alone,
and ever shall be.
yet; so are we all,
and we can huddle together,
and thereby find the warmth.
with you here,
my dear,
it is better.
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- blckbird
- 2008-09-14 @ 00:10:03
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- blckbird
- 2008-09-14 @ 00:14:47
I am a fine one to talk my comments leave much to be desired.
I meant to say watch the free rhythms.
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- 2008-09-17 @ 00:24:43
See, I LIKE the free rhythm. there is flow and form and movement here.
Loved it. More of the same.
Thanks for sharing
blckbird
Pro

May i humbly suggest that y ou edit your writing. I appreciate what i read but think you can exploit the subject more,what the free rhythmns. I shall read you again.