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@ 2009-06-30 – 01:04:01
They were there tonight
white lines over the moon..
Soft cloudy streaks and glistening planes..
Glinting moments in the sky..
A second of someone's time..
A life time within the second.
I love to watch the gliding reflective birds...
I settle in the silence of distant journeys.
I stand still.
For now.
My moment.
As I watch the journeys across gentle skies.
©Prettyintelligentprincess
rolandbastien
Prettyintelligentprincess
Pro Thank you...I am truly flattered.
I do look at my words...in the cold light of day and wonder how they managed to land on the page...
There is always something in your poems that is felt but never stated.
Your detatchment sounds more protective than enjoyed (but that is probably just the way I am hearing it
Prettyintelligentprincess
Pro The way you hear is your true appreciation for the words that are written. Never feel you have to justify your reaction to the written word.
And thank you.
mojacar
That is beautiful. You have got some lovely lines in there. Well done! I wish I had written it.
Prettyintelligentprincess
Pro Thank you...I am very flattered.
Beautiful ! This is a poem to be read aloud. It s musical.
Prettyintelligentprincess
Pro Thank you...I will try that!
jollyweez
Lovely poem. I saw a flock of geese, one early spring, pass the full moon in the dark of night. They were so white in the moonlight!
Your poem brought back those memories of serendipity. Thank you.
Prettyintelligentprincess
Pro I love that sound...and the sight of the long dark V across the glowing sky....
Thank you!
I thought it was beautiful. :-)
Prettyintelligentprincess
Pro Well, thank you very much indeed...
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A second of someone's time..
A life time within the second.
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You capture the insight of time in an elegant manner