I wrote this a few months back when i went through a bad stage in my life.
Please dont judge me by the way.
The anger built up,
The tension then grew,
I picked up the blade,
As i thought of you.
The cut was deep,
But i saw no blood,
So i did it again,
As hard as i could.
The pain was searing,
My heart had stopped.
It wasn't enough,
So the gun was cocked.
I stood there,
Waiting for the right time,
So i pulled the trigger,
As though it was a crime.
My blood went cold,
As it ran down my face,
I lost all sight,
And my heart lost it pace.
So it may not be the best. But i thought id share it. Its my first proper blog post and the first time iv shared my "work". Which is really my emotions at the time.
Coments ?
foxhat
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You write and express yourself very well.
Be careful with this sort of stuff though.