I am not a creative writer...
I am a destructive writer
The thing that it has been
Is not as it shall be
And not as it should be
I discern faults and cracks among the surfaces
and among the faces there are gourds
and shells of eggs
and pickle jars
and horses
with feet of clay and eyes alight with dust
Do comment please.
I am curious to learn where this new material is going, and how long the stream is. Seems an endless not...
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Wowzer! I like this - very evocative. More please!